Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Outline Essay #1

Thesis: Fast food should not be allowed in public schools.

Body Paragraph 1: Fast food is unhealthy therefore; it shouldn't be advertised in schools.

Body Paragraph 2: Kids are the main target for advertisement this is why fast food is advertise in schools.

Body Paragraph 3: Fast food increases the risk of kids suffers from obesity.

Body Paragraph 4: Children are now suffering from adult illness such as diabetes type 2 and this is all consequences of eating fast food.



Fast food contains many different types of chemicals causing children's health system to get weak and produce many illnesses. Schools should be a safe place for students and serving fast food to them shows they don't care for the children. Schools need to explain to students why eating healthy food is important and teach them ways to have a healthy lifestyle. Fast food should not be advertised in public schools because it only makes the children think that is good for them meanwhile it only ruins their health.

Now a day, obesity in children is a massive problem. The main cause of obesity is the unhealthy life style children carry. Not only are kids suffering from obesity but now they are also suffering from adult illness such as Diabetes Type 2, High cholesterol and many others. Fast food only keeps making the number of obese children increase and it should not be allowed in any school.

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